kind of grows on you...
the vocals, i mean. the fact that the guitar playing is great goes without saying.
But it's clear you used some sort of chorus generator, because it definitely sounds like there's more than one of you. i think that this killed the vocals, more than anything. It sounds like the guitar part and the vocals are separated, detached. Your vocals actually aren't all that horrible, if you listen closely -- the accent just makes it a bit unclear.
But in a way, your irish accent (which is what i think it is, sorry not too sure) actually makes the vocals all right, because it goes well with the sort of of laid-back, country feel of the guitar. It makes me think of all the crew singing with a hired professional guitarist. They're singing just because it gives them hope and othersuch good feelings, and he is just really good and solid with the guitar.
Not so bad.