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a ten and a five for you!

brilliant voice-acting, above all. Only thing is i found the prose, while humorous, was a bit excessive. Toning down the modifiers and adjectives and going straight for what you mean would help its flow. I understand the feel was supposed to be rambling and droll, but it was just a bit much. Great job regardless!

AdamCook responds:

You know what? I agree with you 100%! Now that the standard I can deliver has been established, I'll definitely aim to be more concise in the future.

By the way, I like the writing quality evident in your reviews; if a good idea strikes you, maybe at some stage you'd like to contribute a story of your own to the Storybook Collab?
http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1 003968

Cheers for your comments!

Hmm....

I find it amusing that anyone could possibly be offended by this, and I'm religious. It seems like you're attacking a personality that exists among religious types, not quite the religion itself.

For example, your atheist character is witty, logical, and seems to be a nice guy, but your christian character is stupid, obstinate, and he's got a funny accent. Like when he says, "Ah luk after MAH wimmens," i just bust out laughing, because you've got to be a bit more subtle than that! I mean really, why not say, "I think Christians are inherently illogical and stupid!" That's the only complaint about this whole short, the way that your characters are so...just so typical.

The atheist is just so likeable, and the Christian is just so annoying. If you're implying that there are these types of figures in Christianity and atheism, I'm with you, man, all the way. But if you're implying that all religious folk are warmongerers and ignorant, then I'd say that you must know some (pardon the profanity) godawful people. '_^

Could you imagine it, though? The President tells the public on March 19, 2003 that "we have evidence to believe that Iraqi men are mistreating their women, and we have offered sanctions and diplomacy, but they still mistreat their women, and so we had no choice but to bomb them."
"Erm, Mr. President, could you elaborate on the evidence?"
"Well, John, they're Muslims."
"Oh, I see. That...explains it."
Certainly just as factual a reason as any that have been given supporting this war. XD

In conclusion, very well thought-out, not offensive at all, and keep it up! You've got my support, I, a practicing Muslim. All I've got to say is, don't think so bad of us. I'm not sure which religious person inspired your Christian character, or if there was any person at all, but we're not all like that. Most of us aren't. Honest to God.

Cambo responds:

This is the most literary review I think I've ever received. I'm pretty sure you understood the flash, so I guess you're just joking about the personality that exist within religious circles as "stupid, obstinate and a funny accent".

nice...

but why didn't he let go?

faceofdoomness responds:

Because if he did, the video would have come to a disappointing end. :P

I honestly dunno why he didn't let go.. I guess the hunger inside him made him hold on to the Pizza until he realized that it would behis end. Anyways thanks for the review. :D

-faceofdoomness

LOL

good animations, great lip-synch, the voices were a bit fuzzy, but it was funny, and that's what matters. It wasn't impressive or spectacular or anything, but compared to the humor of some of the otherTANKMEN flashes (no offense) it's pretty hilarious.

Horsenwelles responds:

true, i hate cockjokes as much as the next guy :P

needs work

ookaay...
that was just plain wierd. by "Rezivel Fower part 1" do you imply that there will be a part 2? I shudder at the thought =) jk. but seriously, if you do a part 2, make sure it's a lot better than this. like, better animation, voice, a little more complex plot, legible writing, and perhaps a slight bit amusing? otherwise most people wont waste their time.
good luck...

NoobzUnlimited responds:

ya imma ftw

I come in peace...all right that's a lie. Me 'n my buddies are going to take over your world one day.

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